Damn, since when did GfxDiary members concentrate on all the negative aspects? Guys thats not proper feeback!
First of all, that big essay of microtext is useless - nobody can read it and too much of it would be major overuse. I suggest you break it down into small paragraphs and spread it around the wallpaper.
The colours are nice but they need more balance by using more tones and shades. Also maybe do something about the sharpness cos its too sharp, it needs some antialaising. Maybe if you play with the smoothness of the render?
It would be alot nicer if you used some decent typography as opposed to that trendwhore micro-text crap.
Too much microtext.
Xeophex wrote:
and i dont like the lighting at all..
if you watch your desktop you'll become blind..
Damn, since when did GfxDiary members concentrate on all the negative aspects? Guys thats not proper feeback!
First of all, that big essay of microtext is useless - nobody can read it and too much of it would be major overuse. I suggest you break it down into small paragraphs and spread it around the wallpaper.
The colours are nice but they need more balance by using more tones and shades. Also maybe do something about the sharpness cos its too sharp, it needs some antialaising. Maybe if you play with the smoothness of the render?